Feature by Nimra Zafar

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 Feature  kotri has uncountable beauty

 Allah creates many things for this world  for human beings . there are many things  which have beauty as well as  amazement .  many countries , many cities many areas has also  importance and honor.

One of the wonderful world has a very small  and mind blowing city  kotri .

 Kotri is one of the oldest city of Sindh  and taluka of  district jamshoro.  It is ancient  place from the time of English mans . when they rule over the Asia.

 The oldest name of that city  is ( porani kotri )  . it makes relation with one of the biggest city  (Hyderabad ) through  bridge.  which was built by English man . the bridge  is situated on  Indus river . Pakistan it was opend to traffic   on 25  may  1900 and was reconstructed  in 1931 . its total length  is 1,948  feet.  There is only one track  and on both side a road for heavy traffic  in the days of floods  or heavy rain s come in moon soon days  the river flows very high   and it seems  very dangerous. But heart  dance like daffodils.

 Peoples come on river for hunting fishes .the pullah  fish is consider as  the main dish of city . onother hand there is  mandir at the end of river. Which is always full with burhimans  they worship there  and prey  at every  top days of moons  they wash there bodies and do (ash nan).    People of  thar  comes here   because mandir is so holy and scared place for them.

 On river road there is one cinema  for entertainment  the good name  of cinema is (marvi cinema)  which is made up of red and colorful bricks because when film starts light shine over the roof and walls of cinema  then it gives amazement   . when ever new film comes out  on big screen . the crowd of people overcast  on streets for ticket . and when they spared  they  pass there time  in cinema house  and make entertainment

 A lot of things given by almighty Allah to this city .kotri has a big bazar and  

Machli (fish ) market  . in bazar lots of hotels and restaurants where food is in bulk form .  like an early morning  sweets  shops opend  and sells (halwa poori with  (aloo Ki tarkari ) or (aloo Ki bhujiya) .  on Almadina  (  nihari and paaey) , (nalli  nulgri) on Aljilani hotel  crispy paratha  with strong tea.Daal , quorma  and a lot of dishes with beautiful fragrance.

A  cultivated area of kotri , cultivate  many crops  for citizens  . the vegetative as well as productive plants are found in gardens.

  One of the main and incredible thing of that city is .there is line of school for pupils  a big degree college for  girls . where the girls come from every knock

And corner  for education  and getting first class degrees. And now they make there families educated.

A hospital for patient .a good  name of hospital  is (Taluka hospital). Where  (fcps . mcps . gaenaecoligist , e.n. t ) doctors are  available on every time  in day In night on very sunny morning  or in rainy days   they covers emergencies  with full free ship .  and doctors do work with full patience . 

  One important thing which is unforgettable is  A one big  ground for eid namaz where  they clean  there heart   and shakes hand  with each other .  with out any bigotriousness

  A big railway junction is beauty of kotri city .it is very wonderful  .  amain difference of junction and station is that when ever train comes on  track  of any  junction  the guard slow the train any how  but not stops .  and new line are formed on junction  for other cities .  on other hand when ever station is nearer  guard use  breaks and stops the train for a minutes. And then move forward.  Many trains come there and moves faster than fairies and faster then witches.  in railway area  there is one church for christen community it was very old at the time of English people . they built it with strong bricks  and it gives example of that time  architect .

One of the oldest canal  called ( Karachi mori)  is found there . which is 10 feet’s depth  and the heavy water supply  to Karachi from this canal .  when water flow very high  it takes the life of young peoples  who enjoyed there  and bathing there .

 A shrine of (baba  salahuddin  near the canal  from ancient times .  many drama serials released on this shrine . every year when  urs  comes   the( maila) held   the jugglers  , acrobats  and (mout ka kuaan ) formed there  for children  . the pottery of mud selled out there.

At  last  there is  site area of kotri  city.  A lot of factories   found there  detergent companies  like( bright ) surf company  is found there .  it is very power full detergent  use in every home and it is not very costly

A  Colgate company  produces tooth paste , surf , face soaps.

A sapphire produces  yarn and also  started  produce garments

A power batteries   factory  produces multiple  voltage  batteries  and it is now one of the biggest  factory of Pakistan  .

Island by Tata  group= produces yarn .

 Bhanero by hush puppies  group  produces  yarn and fabric .

One of the biggest (  gatta mill )  is also in site kotri. Which produces best quality   gatta or paper.  These factories are the best supporters of Pakistan economy .they make country powerful , strong , prosper and dynamic .   and the people  who are employer  in these factories . the factory   full supports there employs  in education .  cloths .they give full scholarship for other city  university or college . 

 These all things are the  beauty of  my city as well my country  . I feel proud to be citizen of kotri city .

  I prey to Allah , that Allah  give power to my city kotri.