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U should have written ur name properly. Not readable, No proper noun is with capital, too many spelling mistakes, word space is wrong.
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Profile( fight for man kind) of doctor humaira sheikh (gynecologist)
By Nimrazafarpathan
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every person achieved there goal by hard work andmake good progress in life , there life are full of examples .
A good reader and good personality a good sense of humor and example for women . doctor humaira best character and helper .
Dr. Humaira sheikh was born in the year of 1981 , July 16. On very sunny morning in noble family. A first gift of GOD for her parents .she passed matriculation from Happy home high school kotri and intermediate from Nazareth girls college Hyderabad .after intermediate she prepared herself for pre medical entry test for lumhs college in the government of Nawaz shareef. when second entry test held in Pakistan for university. She got second position in district dadu. And she make example for young girls .when she under studied in liaquat university she got married. But after marriage she designed her time in beautiful manner .and continued her studies. After completing five years of studies from lumhs . she do house job in civil hospital . after house job got job in majee hospital . she work` day and night in majee hospital for service of humanity.
She also multi- tasker .she managed her career and also delivered full free ship lectures for new upcoming doctors .
She loves reading books, novels, autobiographies, documentaries . according to her I had a great observing mind .I were extremely hard working and problem solving mind , when I become capable of doing work I write a short poem on my home at the age of 5. I never cry for school leave. I never ever absent in school
Beside that her (muhtarma Fatima Jinnah ) a great personality she has been my inspiration . that’s why I want to become a great doctor.
She faced many challenges after marriage she got baby and after one year she again got twins . it is hard to handle these child with job but she challenged herself and concern on hospital as well as her clinic . she opened her clinic at 7:30 and closed it on 10:00 pm. At her clinic she takes fees 50 rupees per head ,and one day a weak she checkup woman’s full free ship she make her clinic very beautiful . at her clinic she posted a chat of women’s health like( green star) and of many other medicines like (brufin and annuva) and she had a lot of chairs for patients sit properly.
She is humble, very cooperative , down to earth ,and dynamic personality for man kind.
people says about her that she has a lot of knowledge and when we got take medicines from her .we hundred percent sure that now we going set.
She advised for new doctors that not work for money work for man kind ,for humanity because we doctors are (maseeha ) for others .
At last I pray for her that Allah give her respect and strength.
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